Today in class we read out loud poems written by ourselves that were stylized after either Robert Frost or Emily Dickinson in style and subject matter. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to the emotions that my peers chose to share through this intimate writing style. I now understand even more that poetry allows for a unique door into someone's head, really letting you see the inner mechanics of their thoughts. The best moment though came from my teacher telling me that my poem was "really beautiful" after my reading. Receiving praise elevates one so much, especially after opening that door and letting others into your thoughts. That compliment made me feel much more confident in my writing, particularly of poetry. Following this post is the poem read to my class. And so we go.
Overlooked are those on benches,
sitting, watching quietly,
observations made of passersby
in the silence of body and mind.
Weight pressed on planks—
back and seat on—cold, expressionless,
planks, out in elements,
left by Committee and City.
Lonesome are watchers with
imagination blossoming into
flowers pollinated by
bees who blow by.
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